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1SLUT? lol SabrynaName your favorite girl's name that begins with an "S".
2why not... i do!!!do you think it right for guys to wear dresses?
3sure why not although i perfer to see young boys wearing open toed strappy heels that make their butt look yummy in tight girly jeans. =)

What do you think about guys wearing any kind of ballet flats
4YES!! Breast implants last yeas, GRS in jan , & facial feminization in JuneHave you had any surgeries?
5yes, when they found out i was transgendered.Have you had an experience where you found out who your real friends are?
6"Mom, I Need To Be A Girl!" www.justevelyn.comWhat is the book you have read the most amount of times and how many times did you read it?
7I was 17 and was going out with this boy one night. I was our 6th date. I really liked him and he was really into me. He didnot know i was a preop male to female transgender. I had on a green skirt that was 4" above my knee, 1" heeled sandels, a white fitted top that hugged and accentuated my breast( they wren,t real yet, but i had the same breast forms that women ,who have had a breast removed because of cancer, wear.), my hair was pulled back in a ponytail, large hoop earrings, tommygirl perfume, and bare legs. We went to a nice dinner at an expensive restaurant next to the river then we went for a walk along the riverwalk. At one point we started kissing. So far the date is going wonderful and i am on cloud 9, that is until he started to run his hand up and down my leg, each time getting higher and higher. I stopped him and he asked,"why don't you like it?" Oh, boy did i ever and i told him i loved it but that i was on the rag. Thats when he said what are you trying to do to me? I take you to a fancy place and spend all that money on you cause i really like you. We been dating for 2 months. This is our 6th date. An you said the same thing 2 weeks ago. You couldn't possibly still be on the rag. He wanted to know whats going on and ahy could i dres like that to turn him on and make out with him then stop him. My face turned red when I realized that he was right about the 'rag' excuse. Uh oh, now i was nervous. He goes onand on about what my problem could be, and at one point says, "it's not like you are as boy dressed up like a girl trying to trick me." It caught me off guard and I made a face, quickly looking away from him. From that reaction he gets a serious tone about him and says'"hold on! Thats not it is it?" I didnt answer or look at him and he says," it is! S@#$ F@#K, D@#N D@#N D@#N!!!!!" He left me sitting there crying and took off. I had to call my mom to come pick me up and he never talked to me again.Describe your worst date.
8yes there is and i used to have them till i started hormones. Yeah, i dont have the yucky things anymore!!!!Is there seriously such a thing as a wet dream?
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> Its not badly written but it needs some back ground? The above paragraph..........
> is made up of 7 sentences..
> There seemed to be alot of "full stops" when commas would suffice
> making for alot of sentences in some relatively short paragraphs.......
> I am no expert its just my opinion
>
> Erica sat at the picnic table on the back porch contemplating life,
> staring as she often did at the night sky. This was a beautiful time
> of the year, stars shining brightly and a crisp bite in the air which
> was not altogether unpleasant.
> It seemed so ironic that the clarity of the night was in stark contrast
> to her feelings. ................

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Thank you, gambler. I know I'm not a great writer. This was my 1st story. This is what I am looking for, help to make it a story worthy of publishing.
Is this story any good?
10Thanks, Biggles. It is a work in progress and your input has me thinking.Is this story any good?
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